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Subtly Red.
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Its gates are not closing.
It spans quite a spread.
It’s bold and imposing.
It’s subtly red.
Its jumpers are trying,
But most end up dead.
Their loved-ones are crying
As teardrops are shed.
Its purpose is crossing:
Two land masses wed.
Its causeway starts tossing
If earthquake’s ahead.
Its towers are striking.
“Let’s cross it” they said.
Some pass via biking.
Some walk it instead.
Some autos are driving,
On asphalt they tread.
Some seagulls are thriving
While seeking some bread.
Some cars are delaying
While toll booths are fed.
Some cables are swaying,
Thus causing some dread.
It’s sleek and most stunning.
Red spans form its ridge.
It sparkles when sunning:
The Golden Gate Bridge.
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by > Roamoff
composed Dec 2006.
submitted 01 Dec 2006.
Copyright © Dec 2006 by Roamoff.
Subtly Red.
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