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A Day in the Life of the Hyperactive Hawaiian.

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Ms. Michele C. Mugata
Last week went out and bought a
New dress and paid a lotta      
Money for cloth that’s not a
Lush weave so went and caught a
Taxi to where she oughtta
Return the dress and sought a
Sales clerk who went and got a
Returning slip to jot a
Reason Michele just brought a
Good dress back but then shot a
Nasty look and was taught a
Lesson ’cuz she forgotta
Disguise her look and caught a
Left hook in her eye-slot a
Store guard stopped the onslaught a
Refund went to Mugata

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by  > Roamoff
composed 1998.
submitted 01 Apr 2006.
Copyright © 1998 by Roamoff.

A Day in the Life of the Hyperactive Hawaiian.

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This poem was composed while I was stuck in a poorly-run meeting at work, sitting across the table from the co-worker whose name inspired it. I did it while trying to get out of my "Limerick phase" (when I was writing mostly Limericks about co-workers or current events). I had been challenged by an English Professor to stop borrowing other styles and try to invent my own. This was one of the first poems that accomplished that goal.

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